Writing Techniques
Persuasive Writing -
For and Against
Intermediate Level Writing
By
Kenneth Beare,
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Read the following
paragraphs. Notice that this paragraph presents the pros and cons of a shorter
work week.
Introducing a short work week may lead to both positive and
negative affects on society. For workers, the advantages of shortening the work
week include more free time. This will lead to stronger family relationships,
as well as better physical and mental health for all. An increase in free time
should lead to more service sector jobs as people find ways to enjoy their
extra leisure time. What is more, companies will need to hire more workers to
keep production up to past levels of a standard forty hour work week. All
together, these benefits will not only improve quality of life, but also grow
the economy as a whole.
On the other hand, a shorter work week may damage the ability to
compete in the global workplace. Moreover, companies may be tempted to
outsource positions to countries where longer work weeks are common. Another
point is that companies will need to train more workers to make up for the lost
productivity hours. To sum up, companies will likely have to pay a steep price
for shorter work weeks.
In summary, it is clear that there would be a number of positive
gains for individual workers if the work week were shortened. Unfortunately,
this move could easily cause companies to look elsewhere for qualified staff.
In my opinion, the net positive gains outweigh the negative consequences of such
a move towards more free time for all.
Tips for Writing a For and Against Argument
·
Before you begin,
write down at least five positive points, and five negative points for your
argument.
·
Begin your writing by
making a statement about the general statement about outcome of an action, or
the overall situation.
·
Dedicate the first
paragraph to one side of the argument. This can be either positive or negative.
Generally, it is the side with which you agree.
·
The second paragraph
should contain the other side of the argument.
·
The final paragraph
should shortly summarize both paragraphs, and provide your own general opinion
on the matter.
Helpful Language
Expressing Both Sides
pros and cons
advantages and disadvantages
plus and minus
advantages and disadvantages
plus and minus
Providing Additional Arguments
What is more,
In addition to ..., the ...
Further,
Not only will ..., but ... will also ...
In addition to ..., the ...
Further,
Not only will ..., but ... will also ...
Showing Contrast
However,
On the other hand,
Although .....,
Unfortunately,
On the other hand,
Although .....,
Unfortunately,
Ordering
First of all,
Then,
Next,
Finally,
Then,
Next,
Finally,
Summarizing
To sum up,
In conclusion,
In summary,
All things considered,
In conclusion,
In summary,
All things considered,
Expressing Your Opinion
In my opinion,
I feel / think that ...
Personally,
I feel / think that ...
Personally,
Exercise
Choose an for and against argument from one of the following
themes
Attending College / University
Getting Married
Having Children
Changing Jobs
Getting Married
Having Children
Changing Jobs
By
Kenneth Beare,
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Process writing is an
approach to incorporating writing skills from the very beginning of the English
learning process. It was developed by Gail Heald-Taylor in her book Whole
Language Strategies for ESL Students. Process writing focuses on allowing
students - especially young learners - to write with plenty of room left for
error. Standard correction begins slowly, and children are encouraged to
communicate through writing irregardless of their knowledge of English grammar
and structure.
Process writing can also be used in an adult ESL / EFL setting
to encourage learners to start working on their writing skills from a beginning
level. If you are teaching adults, the first thing learners need to understand
is that their writing skills will be well below their native language writing
skills. This seems rather obvious, but adults are often hesitant to produce
written - or spoken - work that is not up to the same level as their native
language skills. By easing your students' fears about producing sub-par written
work, you can help encourage them to improve their writing abilities.
Only mistakes made in grammar and vocabulary that has been
covered up to the current point in time should be corrected. Process writing is
all about the process of writing. Students are striving to come to terms with
writing in English by writing in English. Allowing for mistakes and refining
based on materials covered in class - instead of "perfect English" -
will help students incorporate skills at a natural pace, and improve their
understanding of materials discussed in class in a natural progression.
Here is a short overview of how you can incorporate process
writing into your students' learning routine:
Aim: Improve writing
skills from beginning levels of English
Activity:
Process writing - journals
Level: Beginning to advanced
Materials Needed: Notebook for each student
Outline:
·
Encourage learners to
write in their journal at least a few times a week. Explain the idea of process
writing, and how mistakes aren't important at this stage. If you are teaching
higher levels, you can vary this by stating that mistakes in grammar and syntax
on material not yet covered aren't important, and that this will be a great way
to review material covered in past levels.
·
Students should write
on the front side of each page only. Teachers will provide notes on the writing
on the back. Remember to focus only on material covered in class when correctly
student work.
·
Start this activity by
modeling the first journal entry as a class.
·
Ask students to come
up with various themes that could be covered in a journal (hobbies,
work-related themes, observations of family and friends, etc.). Write these
themes on the board.
·
Ask each student to
choose a theme and write a short journal entry based on this theme. If students
do not know a particular vocabulary item, they should be encouraged to describe
this item (for example: the thing which turns on the TV), or draw the item.
·
Collect the journals
the first time in class and do a quick, superficial correction of each
student's journal. Ask students to rewrite their work based on your comments.
·
After this first
session, collect students' workbooks once a week and correct only one piece of
their writing. Ask students to rewrite this piece.
Writing
By
Kenneth Beare,
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Teaching Writing:
Strategies
The most important factor in writing exercises
is that students need to be personally involved in order to make the learning
experience of lasting value. Encouraging student participation in the exercise,
while at the same time refining and expanding writing skills, requires a
certain pragmatic approach. The teacher should be clear on what skills he/she
is trying to develop. Next, the teacher needs to decide on which means (or type
of exercise) can facilitate learning of the target area. Once the target skill
areas and means of implmentation are defined, the teacher can then proceed to
focus on what topic can be employed to ensure student participation. By
pragmatically combing these objectives, the teacher can expect both enthusiasm
and effective learning.
Choosing the target area depends on many factors; What level are the students?, What is the average age of the students, Why are the students learning English, Are there any specific future intentions for the writing (i.e school tests or job application letters etc.). Other important questions to ask oneself are: What should the students be able to produce at the end of this exercise? (a well written letter, basic communication of ideas, etc.) What is the focus of the exercise? (structure, tense usage, creative writing). Once these factors are clear in the mind of the teacher, the teacher can begin to focus on how to involve the students in the activity thus promoting a positive, long-term learning experience.
Having decided on the target area, the teacher can focus on the means to achieve this type of learning. As in correction, the teacher must choose the most appropriate manner for the specified writing area. If formal business letter English is required, it is of little use to employ a free expression type of exercise. Likewise, when working on descriptive language writing skills, a formal letter is equally out of place.
With both the target area and means of production, clear in the teachers mind, the teacher can begin to consider how to involve the students by considering what type of activities are interesting to the students; Are they preparing for something specific such as a holiday or test?, Will they need any of the skills pragmatically? What has been effective in the past? A good way to approach this is by class feedback, or brainstorming sessions. By choosing a topic that involves the students the teacher is providing a context within which effective learning on the target area can be understaken.
Finally, the question of which type of correction will facilitate a useful writing exercise is of utmost importance. Here the teacher needs to once again think about the overall target area of the exercise. If there is an immediate task at hand, such as taking a test, perhaps teacher guided correction is the most effective solution. However, if the task is more general (for example developing informal letter writing skills), maybe the best approach would be to have the students work in groups thereby learning from each other. Most importantly, by choosing the correct means of correction the teacher can encourage rather discourage students.
Choosing the target area depends on many factors; What level are the students?, What is the average age of the students, Why are the students learning English, Are there any specific future intentions for the writing (i.e school tests or job application letters etc.). Other important questions to ask oneself are: What should the students be able to produce at the end of this exercise? (a well written letter, basic communication of ideas, etc.) What is the focus of the exercise? (structure, tense usage, creative writing). Once these factors are clear in the mind of the teacher, the teacher can begin to focus on how to involve the students in the activity thus promoting a positive, long-term learning experience.
Having decided on the target area, the teacher can focus on the means to achieve this type of learning. As in correction, the teacher must choose the most appropriate manner for the specified writing area. If formal business letter English is required, it is of little use to employ a free expression type of exercise. Likewise, when working on descriptive language writing skills, a formal letter is equally out of place.
With both the target area and means of production, clear in the teachers mind, the teacher can begin to consider how to involve the students by considering what type of activities are interesting to the students; Are they preparing for something specific such as a holiday or test?, Will they need any of the skills pragmatically? What has been effective in the past? A good way to approach this is by class feedback, or brainstorming sessions. By choosing a topic that involves the students the teacher is providing a context within which effective learning on the target area can be understaken.
Finally, the question of which type of correction will facilitate a useful writing exercise is of utmost importance. Here the teacher needs to once again think about the overall target area of the exercise. If there is an immediate task at hand, such as taking a test, perhaps teacher guided correction is the most effective solution. However, if the task is more general (for example developing informal letter writing skills), maybe the best approach would be to have the students work in groups thereby learning from each other. Most importantly, by choosing the correct means of correction the teacher can encourage rather discourage students.
By
Kenneth Beare,
About.com Guide
Narrative paragraphs
are often used to describe our routines. Read this example narrative paragraph,
notice how words like 'sometimes, often, etc.' are used to say often something
happens.
Every Saturday morning
I get up at eight o'clock. I immediately cook breakfast and my daughter and my
wife and I usually have breakfast together. I usually go shopping. My daughter
and wife usually go to the park to have some fun with the other children in our
neighborhood. After I do the shopping, I come home and my wife and I clean the
house. My wife then cooks lunch while my daughter plays in her room and then we
eat together. After lunch, we sometimes go shopping. If we don't go shopping,
we often go to the countryside for a nice walk. We often get home quite late
and have a small dinner. We usually watch a film on TV and then go to bed at
about eleven o'clock.
Written Exercise I
Answer the following questions by choosing the words that best
fit your habits. Click on the arrow to choose the word you want to complete the
sentences.
·
When do you get up?
I usually / sometimes / rarely get up early
/ late .
·
What do you usually do
on Saturday mornings?
I often / sometimes / never go to the
supermarket / the gym / the park to do some shopping / take a walk / get
fit .
·
Do you go to the
temple / the mosque / church on Fridays / Saturdays / Sundays ?
Yes / No , I go / don't go to the temple / the mosque / church
on Fridays / Saturdays / Sundays .
·
What do you like doing
in your free time?
Sometimes / Often I like reading books / playing sports /
watching TV / listening to music / walking in the countryside . I also sometimes
/ often like reading books / playing sports / watching TV / listening to
music walking in the countryside .
Written Exercise II
Now that you have a good feeling for the form of a narrative
paragraph describing habits. Fill in the gaps in this paragraph with
information about what you usually do on Sundays.
Sunday is a _______________ day for me. I _______________ like _______________. I _______________ get up
_______________ and then I _______________. After _______________, I often go
_______________. Sometimes, I like _______________ . In the evening, I
_______________ like _______________ . I
usually go to bed around _______________.
Practice
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